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**Styleforum Gives - Holiday Charity Auction 1: Outerwear and winter accessories from No Man Walks Alone
We are very proud to present this year's edition of the Styleforum Holiday Charity Auctions, this year in support of the Ronald McDonald House Charities of Spokane (www.rmhcspokane.org). Each Auction lasts 24 hours. Please follow and bid on all the auctions.
The 1st auction of the year is for a Goodies from No Man Walks Alone. Please bid often and generously here
Fok and the Styleforum Team.**
Banner on page ONE! Come on guys.....
-No period after “here”.
-Same paragraph....”is for a Goodies from.......”
Should be “is for goodies......”
Goodies isn’t capitalized and “a” isn’t necessary.
-“Team” really should not be capitalized.
-“present this year's edition of the Styleforum Holiday Charity Auctions, this year in support of the Ronald McDonald House”
“This year” twice in a sentence? How about “present 2019’s edition...........this year in support”.
-“Each Auction lasts 24 hours...”
“Auction” should not be capitalized.
101!
I know that I pick on the banners, but whoever is writing/editing them needs to realize that many people look at that content, especially if visiting for the first time..
I hope it isn’t the same person editing the email blogs that are sent out.....which I haven’t gotten around to reading.
Who do I send my monthly invoice to?
We are very proud to present this year's edition of the Styleforum Holiday Charity Auctions, this year in support of the Ronald McDonald House Charities of Spokane (www.rmhcspokane.org). Each Auction lasts 24 hours. Please follow and bid on all the auctions.
The 1st auction of the year is for a Goodies from No Man Walks Alone. Please bid often and generously here
Fok and the Styleforum Team.**
Banner on page ONE! Come on guys.....
-No period after “here”.
-Same paragraph....”is for a Goodies from.......”
Should be “is for goodies......”
Goodies isn’t capitalized and “a” isn’t necessary.
-“Team” really should not be capitalized.
-“present this year's edition of the Styleforum Holiday Charity Auctions, this year in support of the Ronald McDonald House”
“This year” twice in a sentence? How about “present 2019’s edition...........this year in support”.
-“Each Auction lasts 24 hours...”
“Auction” should not be capitalized.
101!
I know that I pick on the banners, but whoever is writing/editing them needs to realize that many people look at that content, especially if visiting for the first time..
I hope it isn’t the same person editing the email blogs that are sent out.....which I haven’t gotten around to reading.
Who do I send my monthly invoice to?