30 second video advice?

[Brianpore]

Hi, Im putting together a quick 30 second video for our company and wanted to get some advice / feedback on your thoughts. Good or bad / way to improve it.

It would be targeted for like minded Styleforum members on platforms like facebook and youtube, would it be something you click on to find out more, why or why not?

 

[Panama]

It depends what the returns are? How much are my circa 2000 era Polos or jackets from Burberry really worth?

 

[Brianpore]

It depends what the returns are? How much are my circa 2000 era Polos or jackets from Burberry really worth?

Hi, thanks for the reply. The video would be bringing potential consignors to our site in which we consignor the top luxury brands. A full list of the accepted brands would be found on our website. https://www.tailoredconsignment.com/brands

Im more curious thoughts on the video itself vs the underlying business strategy if that makes sense.

Does it grab your attention to watch till the end?​

Would it peak your interest to click on the link to our website and find out more information?​