There is nothing I dislike about this fit, but IMO you're too young to have what seems to be such an established uniform... you and Kodiak both seem to post fits that appear to be exactly the same as atleast 3/4 of the rest of the fits you've posted.
Not really an established uniform, I just get the sense that Biscotti has limited disposable income (understandably) and uses it to make extremely judicious clothing purchases. Same with Kodiak, although he seems to have more money at his disposal. They're both teenagers, I believe.
Honestly, I wish I had adopted their strategy for buying clothes.