Roger, the tie is too business and too city. Pocket square is kind of unredeemable--I mean, it's very, very loud. I suppose one could fathom an outfit where it could be worn alright, but it's difficult to do. Better to avoid altogether. I don't like the shirt either, but it's sort of hard to make it out. I can say this though: the patterns between the shirt, tie, and jacket are all too tightly packed to look good together. Need more differentiation.