I like your haircut shore and I like everything in this look except for the visvim jacket. It just looks like the robe they give you when you go inside a steam room in the banya.
Visvim lhamo is dope, maybe i'm biased since I own one
Easy to wear, fun to layer
If you're wearing it closed, try knotting like I did below, pull the strings together and make a single knot, looks a little cleaner (this is how HIROKI told me to wear it) Warning: Spoiler!(Click to show)
Over 24 years of painstaking observation and precise recording, I have discovered that hair does, in fact, grow. I thus conclude that your mistake is not particularly grave.
For more of these ground-breaking discoveries, read my thesis. (it's on lymph nodes, not hair)