Kiwi Man
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Hello guys,
This is how my story went. Unilever in Thailand just had this thing called "future leader program." The way it worked was it consisted with four steps. First one, the only picked handful of applicants to do alptitude test. The second one, they announced the result of the test and the third one was the phone interview. The last one was the one that they called assessment day.
I went through all the process to the 4th one and they just announced the result today that I don't get the position.
First, I thought that I would just let it go and live my life so I could move on and looking for other opportunities, but I had the second thought so I decided to send the email which stated exactly as the following;
Hello there,
__________________________________________________________________________
First of all, I'd like to thank you for giving me the opportunity that I had never had before. I had learnt a lot from it and I sure hope that I would be able to take advantage and get fimiliar with the whole process.
I have high expectation to obtain this position as I thought that I had really given it my all when I went through the process of assessment. Obviously, it was not good enough and I'm afraid to say that I'm disappointed in myself. However, whatever happened in past would only make me to become a better person so I can only move on from this point.
I don't know if it is possible, but it would be highly appreciative of you to give me a feedback of what more I could have done.
Thank you for your concerns and goodbye
(my name)
__________________________________________________________________________
I understand there are some grammar issueswith my writing as my English is the second language. However, I would appreciate your feedback.
Thank you
This is how my story went. Unilever in Thailand just had this thing called "future leader program." The way it worked was it consisted with four steps. First one, the only picked handful of applicants to do alptitude test. The second one, they announced the result of the test and the third one was the phone interview. The last one was the one that they called assessment day.
I went through all the process to the 4th one and they just announced the result today that I don't get the position.
First, I thought that I would just let it go and live my life so I could move on and looking for other opportunities, but I had the second thought so I decided to send the email which stated exactly as the following;
Hello there,
__________________________________________________________________________
First of all, I'd like to thank you for giving me the opportunity that I had never had before. I had learnt a lot from it and I sure hope that I would be able to take advantage and get fimiliar with the whole process.
I have high expectation to obtain this position as I thought that I had really given it my all when I went through the process of assessment. Obviously, it was not good enough and I'm afraid to say that I'm disappointed in myself. However, whatever happened in past would only make me to become a better person so I can only move on from this point.
I don't know if it is possible, but it would be highly appreciative of you to give me a feedback of what more I could have done.
Thank you for your concerns and goodbye
(my name)
__________________________________________________________________________
I understand there are some grammar issueswith my writing as my English is the second language. However, I would appreciate your feedback.
Thank you