HomerJ
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In the present thread, post, if you wrote something, for a report or CV, perhaps your clothing blog and you're not sure whether it's good writing or even understandable, your question here, and someone will offer suggestions, which are helpful, and perhaps your old writing and new writing could then be characterized as clunky and elegant, respectively; clear as mud?
My question to start.
I've written: "greater [effect] using [Method A] than [Method B]."
I feel an urge to put another "using" or a "with" between the last two.
My question to start.
I've written: "greater [effect] using [Method A] than [Method B]."
I feel an urge to put another "using" or a "with" between the last two.