I like both combinations colour-wise. The first is a bit more autumn-like and the second more spring-like in my eyes. I'm not yet wholly convinced that neat print ties work well with gun clubs but that is a tiny detail. As for the jacket length, it seems to me that it is long enough to cover your posterior, which is how it should be. There is some trope about a jacket having to reach your knuckles, but you seem to have long arms, and a longer jacket would probably throw the balance off.