the f-in master

[wrekhavok]

Hey there fashion viewers names Lance here im new to the forums . Im a up an coming fashion designer on my way to the top lol really looking for peoples feedback so i can better my designs, marketing, and pricing whatever takes me to the top !!! thanks keep an eye out for me haha...

 

[Blackhood]

You wont do well here.

 

[wrekhavok]

care to elaborate on that , kinda vague there ....

 

[FLMountainMan]



care to elaborate on that , kinka vague there .... 

You've declared yourself "the ******* Master" and an "up and coming fashion designer". Tall Poppy Syndrome aside, you come off as a helicopter-parented twat.

 

[Gingahbman]

These fake account ideas are getting worse and worse.

 

[wrekhavok]

You've declared yourself "the ******* Master" and an "up and coming fashion designer". Tall Poppy Syndrome aside, you come off as a helicopter-parented twat.

I'm sorry you feel that way . It sounds like you might be having a bad day, i hope you feel better after this Maybe you could instead take a look at my stuff an give some feed back positive or negative instead of drawing assumptions based on one post ?? i don't know im just the helicopter-parented twat here

 

[MrG]

I think I received your avatar the last time I prestiged in Call of Duty. I felt like the effin' master then, I'll tell you that right now.

 

[wrekhavok]

lol love me some CoD but i'm waiting for Diablo 3

 

[FLMountainMan]



I'm sorry you feel that way . It sounds like you might be having a bad day, i hope you feel better after this Maybe you could instead take a look at my stuff an give some feed back positive or negative instead of drawing assumptions based on one post ?? i don't know im just the helicopter-parented twat here

Having a pretty good day actually. If you post the link to your stuff, I'll be happy to give you a trophy for it.

 

[wrekhavok]

Cool thanks www.perfekttension.com

 

[Flambeur]



Cool thanks http://www.perfekttension.com  

 

[wrekhavok]

well thats a link to my website i was asked for the link . These are my clothes , the stuff i was asking feedback on thats all really

 

[FLMountainMan]

Yeah, based on your first email, that website is nothing like what I expected. At all.

 

[wrekhavok]

cool now that you've looked at it what do you think ???

 

[Blackhood]



cool now that you've looked at it what do you think ??? 

Ok so my first post was a little harsh. This is the one constructive post you'll get.

1. Don't claim to be a Master and a newbie in one post. Apart from being stupid it makes you sound like an arrogant douche.
2. You missed a very clearly labelled thread for introducing yourself. You're not a special flower. Play the game by the rules.
3. You've very clearly labelled yourself as Streetware. Why not post in the Streetware forum? seems like a match, no?
4. I tried three browsers before I could make your website work. Don't just design for IE/Safari/Chrome/Firefox. Design for all of them.
5. I gave up trying to explore that flash site, Units don't fit, images are cut up and its lacking in function. I'd personally recommend a full redesign, by someone who knows what they're doing.
6. I spotted three pictures of clothes. You need to up the amount of "product" and decrease the amount of "brand"

I wont comment on the style, because it is clearly not mine, but it might float a few guys boats.

So reel in the ego, respect the fact that the people round here don't like upstarts, but do have a lot of experience in the fashion industries. Several businesses have grown or started as a direct result of this forum, but you don't get a golden ticket.