T-Shirts

[401442]

I'm sorry to create a new account just to post this, but I've been on spreadshirt.net basically making t-shirt designs. Just looking for some feedback, I really have a bit more to do, but who knows if you like ones of the designs I'd be much obliged if you purchased one.

Link to store

 

[likeitaloud]

looks terrible, it's like the whole thing was done in paint.

 

[Ich_Dien]

Originally Posted by 401442

I'm sorry to create a new account just to post this, but I've been on spreadshirt.net basically making t-shirt designs. Just looking for some feedback, I really have a bit more to do, but who knows if you like ones of the designs I'd be much obliged if you purchased one.

Link to store

Wrong forum lad.

 

[401442]

Thanks for that consructive critisism "likeitaloud".

 

[modagg]

Originally Posted by 401442

Thanks for that consructive critisism "likeitaloud".

the whole thing is ****, pure ****

 

[Arman]

If I was into ugly crap that no one else had, this would be right up my alley!

CHEERS!

 

[401442]

I see.

I realise now, after scanning your forum, that it is full of pretentious dickheads. Oh well. Thanks for the feedback anyway.

 

[Schnurretiger]

Maybe you should work on your designs then?

 

[401442]

True.

 

[Zenny]

Maybe if they were totally blank I could use them as undershirts.

 

[Daneel]

Welcome to the forum 401442.

I wouldn't go as far as you in my assessment of the forum members here, but they certainly know what they like and are outspoken about things they don't. I'm not the most tactful person in the world but I try to offer constructive criticism or a not to my taste comment rather than tearing people to shreds.

As to your t-shirts, I'm in the not for me category. The /. one has some potential, red and black is a good combination and I like the text down the side, it's the big A in the middle putting me off. I'm struggling to see what you are going for with them, if there was more of a theme and direction to them, I think they'd go down better.

Try not to get put off immediately, there's a lot you can learn here.

 

[james nicolas]

i don't know if you know this or not..
but tg76 from superfuture has been making a joy division shirt just like that for over a year

heres the thread:
http://www.superfuture.com/supertalk...ad.php?t=37162

if you go through a few pages you'll see the shirt in several different colorways

 

[Composer_1777]

Originally Posted by 401442

I'm sorry to create a new account just to post this, but I've been on spreadshirt.net basically making t-shirt designs. Just looking for some feedback, I really have a bit more to do, but who knows if you like ones of the designs I'd be much obliged if you purchased one.

Link to store

I like the splatter one actually. It's orientated properly at the bottom to make the shirt interesting while still salvaging the solid classic color of the "T-shirt." I would make them solid contrast color splatters though. Say, like, white wit red splatter and then u could have some red in your kicks as well, color coordination is where its at.

Pretntious, nah; but the way u presented yourself created a psychological bias. People have a built up immunity to solicitation and automaticaly affiliate negative feelings toward it. Thats all that happened, don't take it personally.

 

[likeitaloud]

Originally Posted by 401442

Thanks for that consructive critisism "likeitaloud".
Ok..first of all was this NOT done in paint? And constructively speaking this is still **** as people stated above. Designing T-shirts is not your cup of tea. The colors are off, the designs are totally ridiculous what are you going for? I can't even call this a design you dragged a gradient bar over a picture of a white T-shirt wtf is that suppose to be? The splatter is not an atrocious idea (don't get me wrong it still looks like ****) but you need to change the colors, the size and the distribution pattern. I am seriously struggling to believe that this is not a joke, but nice try though

 

[CharlieAngel]

Digital Pink reminds me of Brock Lesnar's sword tattoo.
Brock Lesnar's Sword tattoo looks like a big penis on his chest.
That shirt reminds me of a giant 8-bit penis. On the chest.
As I'm not a fan of penises, real or 8 bit, on my chest, I'm not really digging that shirt.