Suit fit critique (pics). Help with suit shoulder width, comparison between store bought and mtm.

[Jesse Burnett]

Hello, I just need help on the shoulder width of my suit jackets, Also I was wondering if you could give your opinion on what you think of the fit overall, based on the pictures provided. The first picture is a cheap, store bought jacket with an extra half an inch of shoulder width more than the following 3 pictures, which are of my first full canvas mtm suit. Thanks.