ghulkhan
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I had made a previous thread about an essay for transfer to NYU
well i have taken all your ideas and edited it completely
grammar should be on spot...
not as simple as before
the question was, why do you want to transfer to nyu and how would nyu would be able to help you reach your education goals
any comments before i turn it in would be highly appreciated
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\tNew York University offers a broad curriculum and faculty for its undergraduate Psychology program. For example, NYU’s Psychology department offers a variety of core specific lab courses that are designed with a hands-on approach to teach students to use research techniques in the various subfields of psychology. This combined with a more robust faculty enables students to focus on a core concentration in modern psychology to a greater extent then my current institution. In addition, NYU offers a number of opportunities for student research. This is important to gain a greater understanding of the field, enabling students to use their education outside of a purely academic world.
\tMoreover, college is a time for students to seek fulfillment, both intellectual and personal. My intellectual curiosity has pushed me to study psychology because it lies at the root of many seemingly unrelated human and historical events. NYU encourages students to pursue diverse interests in the cause of this fulfillment by placing creativity and intellectual curiosity where it belongs, at the heart of academic strut. Therefore it offers even students of other disciplines training and education in film and the arts. I would love to be able to take advantage of the program that Tisch offers for NYU undergraduates to minor in the production of films. This would offer me broader exploration as a student and possible pursuits in the professional world after college.
\tA classroom environment that is not cloistered but psychologically and socially open is important for a rich classroom experience. I am looking for a classroom environment where the discussion represents the views of people whose backgrounds are more varied then what exit on the New Jersey Turnpike they are from. Although the students at GW are nationally and ethnically diverse, they represent primarily the same socio-economic groups or political opinions, creating an academic environment that is rather stifling then creative. During my visits to NYU, I have noticed that NYU students see difference as creativity where GW students see difference as heterodoxy. Due to NYU’s lack of a campus, its students become a part of the City rather then a system within the City. At NYU, students cannot hide themselves in an ivory tower but are encouraged to engage in the City cosmopolitan. GW, by contrast, embraces its hemmed-in nature by explicitly naming its upperclassman dormitory and my residence, The Ivory Tower. This facet of the NYU experience enables its students to draw their values and beliefs from probably the most diverse city in the world, creating a rich classroom experience. Since NYU students are diverse in ways in a manner greater then simply ethnic or national background, they create an environment conducive to original thinking and intellectual growth. This is environment is important to developing attitudes that will serve the student in his lifelong pursuits, both practical and academic.
well i have taken all your ideas and edited it completely
grammar should be on spot...
not as simple as before
the question was, why do you want to transfer to nyu and how would nyu would be able to help you reach your education goals
any comments before i turn it in would be highly appreciated
....
\tNew York University offers a broad curriculum and faculty for its undergraduate Psychology program. For example, NYU’s Psychology department offers a variety of core specific lab courses that are designed with a hands-on approach to teach students to use research techniques in the various subfields of psychology. This combined with a more robust faculty enables students to focus on a core concentration in modern psychology to a greater extent then my current institution. In addition, NYU offers a number of opportunities for student research. This is important to gain a greater understanding of the field, enabling students to use their education outside of a purely academic world.
\tMoreover, college is a time for students to seek fulfillment, both intellectual and personal. My intellectual curiosity has pushed me to study psychology because it lies at the root of many seemingly unrelated human and historical events. NYU encourages students to pursue diverse interests in the cause of this fulfillment by placing creativity and intellectual curiosity where it belongs, at the heart of academic strut. Therefore it offers even students of other disciplines training and education in film and the arts. I would love to be able to take advantage of the program that Tisch offers for NYU undergraduates to minor in the production of films. This would offer me broader exploration as a student and possible pursuits in the professional world after college.
\tA classroom environment that is not cloistered but psychologically and socially open is important for a rich classroom experience. I am looking for a classroom environment where the discussion represents the views of people whose backgrounds are more varied then what exit on the New Jersey Turnpike they are from. Although the students at GW are nationally and ethnically diverse, they represent primarily the same socio-economic groups or political opinions, creating an academic environment that is rather stifling then creative. During my visits to NYU, I have noticed that NYU students see difference as creativity where GW students see difference as heterodoxy. Due to NYU’s lack of a campus, its students become a part of the City rather then a system within the City. At NYU, students cannot hide themselves in an ivory tower but are encouraged to engage in the City cosmopolitan. GW, by contrast, embraces its hemmed-in nature by explicitly naming its upperclassman dormitory and my residence, The Ivory Tower. This facet of the NYU experience enables its students to draw their values and beliefs from probably the most diverse city in the world, creating a rich classroom experience. Since NYU students are diverse in ways in a manner greater then simply ethnic or national background, they create an environment conducive to original thinking and intellectual growth. This is environment is important to developing attitudes that will serve the student in his lifelong pursuits, both practical and academic.