Please Critique My Shirt

[StinkyPete1211]

This is my third order from Indochino. I think I'm getting closer....
They are running a sale this week so and need everyone's advice to make my next order perfect.


These are the adjustments I plan to make on the shirt below:
Neck +.25
Shirt Sleeve Length +..25
Wrist +.25 (unbuttoned in the picture)

I would like to know what other adjustments I should make to reduce the billowing at the waist and back.

Thanks in advance!

 

[SartodiNapoli]

Hello,

Do not know the maker or the price, I guess is low cost.

As shirtmaker I say,

The front seems good for what I read on similar post as you, in fact way better than usual.

Could be improved narrowing the shoulder width, ( note you will have to compensate the sleeve lenght)

that might reduce the bulk on the back scye and also might improve the sleeve pitch.

reduce the waist a bit.

This shirt looks better than some of so called “best” European bespoke shirtmakers I exposse most of the time that also might cost 3-5 times more.

 

[Shirtmaven]

not bad
you need a left low adjustment if they can do that.
also add darts to the back to reduce the back fullness