Those jeans look a bit too tight around the crotch/thigh area, no? Also, I don't really think that jacket & square work at all with those jeans, sorry. The turtleneck itself is nice though. These kinds of yellow/green/brown shades are damn difficult to pull off. They can easily look a bit sickly. I'm not 100% convined you've managed it, but it's a brave attempt. The sunglasses are cool, too. On a non-clothes note, it's fun that you managed to find a backdrop with graffiti in the same colour family!