Feedback Needed For My New Blog

[Bliss]

Hello Everyone, this is my 1st forum pos so I am not sure how this really works. If I do make any silly boo boo, pl try and understand. You see, I have a blog www.thestylebliss.com (my first blog attempt) which I worked very hard on and I am not sure if the blog is OK; of acceptable standard; whether it is of interest to people reading it; the content relevancy etc. I would really appreciate it if I can have some feedback to see how I can go from here. Thank you all for your time and I look forward to many sharing at this forum with you. Cheers! from Bliss

 

[philipp]

I think, you use the word 'bliss' too often.

 

[Bliss]

Thank you Philipp for your comment. Cheers!

 

[LanceW]

The blinking ad image is distracting!

 

[Zachgranstrom]

Originally Posted by philipp

I think, you use the word 'bliss' too often.

+1. You need to seriously tone-down using the word 'bliss'.

 

[Bliss]

Your comment is veryful and it's being noted - will work on the 'bliss' bit. Thanks!

 

[Bliss]

Thank you for taking time to view my blogs - I'll see what can be done to the blinking ads. Cheers!

 

[Pylon]

You should use more blinking ads. That attracts more attention to your website. More animated GIFs in the body of the blog, too. The more things that move and blink, and the more things on the page, the more people will pay attention.

Ideally, your blog should have some sort of auto-loading MIDI sound file. Perhaps "Sweet Home Alabama" or something of the sort. This conveys class and style and sets the reader at ease (or "bliss", as you say): http://bit.ly/dwvuiY

 

[Bliss]

Good tips; thank you!

 

[jzmq]

but anyway, the words you write are warm.. great..

 

[Bliss]

Thank you!!