Critique my style please!

[sheeptoken]

Please do indicate anything I need to fix or I can improve on. There's quite a bit that I'm willing to try out. Thanks in advance!

 

[Souper]

There's a thread for this. please repost in WAYWT.

 

[sheeptoken]

Yeah my bad I noticed AFTER I posted. Will do!

 

[datasupa]

You could start by changing your everything.

 

[Mr. Potato]

Damn, which grocery store are you gonna rob? First off, go to the "What are you wearing today" thread. Look at other people. See which ones you like and can work with. Then go from there.

 

[sbbbjm]

honestly, you look 12 - the oversized clothing does nothing but make you look smaller

the glasses look like coke bottles

ankle socks? . . . . .

get a hair cut, and a place that charges at least $25

that long key chain strap thing, is pretty ghetto fab too

and the bandana needs a very special look (that is lacking) to be pulled off without looking contrived

basically, you FAIL!

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but this can be fixed

get yourself some nice fitted AA tees

a pair of APC new standards, you could probably fit New Cures

some impeccably fitting button ups and polos

. . . and you'll fit in like a charm

 

[Fade to Black]

troll alert?

 

[datasupa]

Why are people directing him to WAYWT? Everyone knows you get more and faster responses if you make a new thread for everything. Existing threads are for chumps.

 

[bach]

Originally Posted by datasupa

Why are people directing him to WAYWT? Everyone knows you get more and faster responses if you make a new thread for everything. Existing threads are for chumps.

 

[Nouveau Pauvre]

It would be helpful if you stated what your middle school does and does not allow.

 

[sheeptoken]

Originally Posted by Magician

It would be helpful if you stated what your middle school does and does not allow.

HAHA so funny to me because I go to a All Guys Catholic High School with a strict uniform dress code. What I do is go out a lot with friends. Summer will give me even more chances. Anything should be up for grabs because of this.

 

[hossoso]

Are those Girl Scout cookies on the counter behind you? If so, you're going to fit in fine here. Just fine.

 

[sheeptoken]

indeed sir, they ARE girl scouts cookies. I do remember at the moment on the top are samoas and I dont know what's under it. I do frequently scavenge for food haha. I will post more fits as soon as they come!

 

[AR_Six]

The strict dress code your school insists on is, I would bet, much better than this.

 

[cldpsu]

Colors are good