I'll start -
The ridiculously tight suit - both jacket and pants.
The horrible "suit with no socks" look. (Made to look all the more stylish by the "scratching mosquito bite on my ankle" photograph.)
The shoes - which don't much appeal to me in the first place, especially with the suit in question - are particularly inappropriate for wearing without socks. Also, while it's hard to be 100% sure from the picture, they seem a few sizes too large for the model's foot. The right foot. The itchy one.
The suit pants are too short.
Okay, who wants to chime in with some more?
The yellow shirt. Worn with a suit. Nope, nope, nope.
Hi guys, any solutions for the "ridge" on shoulders here? The shoulders just aren't sloping down smoothly like they should do.
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Looks like the collar needs to be lowered--looks like you have a roll of fabric behind the neck. A decent tailor should be able to fix.
It does look like the shoulders are a bit too wide for you, but hard to tell from that picture. Also, the lapels are super thin. Not great.