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Clags, I like everything about this except the tucked pocket flaps (or welted, flapless pockets).
I know that you don't like flapped pockets, but it seems to me that an odd jacket like this - especially one with a ticket pocket - looks best with flapped pockets. There just something about a welted ticket pocket (or a ticket pocket with the flap tucked in) that looks a bit odd/incongruous.