Thanks for your comments! I should add first though that it's a charcoal gunclub (gasp a gray SC? I can see it has a bluish hue though idk anymore). Does that change your thoughts on the PS any? I quite liked the fit I thought I'd done good this time, simple but relatively tasteful, but I didn't get many thumbs it seems.
Included picture here for good measure:
I have no beef with a gray SC, but that one's a very cool gray. I still the the PS is too vivid, which is the biggest problem with it.
People like the weirdest things. I think the only thing of mine that got into the 20+ thread involved tan balmorals, an odd jacket, a large-scale paisley tie, and cranberry-colored corduroys.
But I think one natural, relaxed full length (not such an easy photo to make, but practice helps) and one close-up would serve better a torso shot and an oddly cropped full length. That would probably be likely to get good feedback.