I'm looking at ordering some MTM shirts and was hoping to use this shirt as a starting point. Any GNA on what I should change to improve the fit and the shape of collar?
It's hard to tell on the back. When you wear a jacket, do you see a little bit of your shirt cuff? The sleeve length looks ok but it might pull up with a SC on.
If this were me, I would have the shoulder seam to seam taken in just a touch (it's sort of starting to go over the curve of your shoulder). The front looks ok, but I wonder if it is slightly too tight at the chest. Side shot suggests that it is pulling a little. I can't tell anything from the back, but it does look a bit messy. You could have things taken in a little at the back but keeping the overall circumference the same. Make sure, however, that you give yourself enough allowances at waist and chest, 2-4 inches depending on how slim you want it.
Don't know what to say about the collar. What's the issue? Do the points fit under a SC? Looks like they probably will. Height is fine, I think.
On MTM shirts. Change variables slowly and in moderation. It can be a long process and you have to be patient.
as Sr. Liverano says, "Better to buy one bespoke suit per year for ten years and have ten suits that will last you a life time...than to look terrible"....or something along those lines.