The former (more recent one) is a pretty standard kind of hybrid SW&D workwear look (and not bad for that - certainly much better than the OP's attempts at this) but the latter (earlier picture) isn't good, and not just because of the lack of laces - black shoes and black shirt with dark blue denim?
Dark gray shirt, actually, but close enough . I've got no problem with black shoes and dark blue denim (although I'd rather have been wearing a longwing blucher than a balmoral boot here, I just don't have one at the moment..) -- you see that a lot in street wear; I wear black Wolverines with these jeans all the time. Which leads me to:
But again, it's not so much whether it's good or bad as the fact that this is all on the wrong side of the forum: it's SW&D not CM.
I actually totally agree with that, but the thread is where it is (unless a moderator can move it?)