So I go to Neiman's on Saturday to purchase a pair of linen Armani pants
Great way to start a sentence, firstly it should start with Therefore, So is not an apt word to begin a sentence with, secondly, there should be a comma after so or therefore.
Something is seriously wrong here...I mean what business turns down customers? Especially affluent customers?
That is not a grammatically correct question.
Another friend of mine is in upper-middle management with NM and he said during the opening weekend of one of their stores they
It should be: Another friend of mine is in upper-middle management with NM and he said that during the opening weekend of one of his or her stores they lost about $800,000 Firstly, you are missing that in your sentence, and secondly it is politically incorrect to say their in the above case. I Could continue for days....