Rags, going to have to call this a miss. The cardigan is throwing everything off. The pick stitching on the chest is pretty bad. And the fact that it's another pattern (granted hiding under the solid piping strip) adds all kinds of confusion. Lose the sweater and I think you have a much nicer fit. I also think a pale blue shirt would be better with greys and browns.
Thanks for the feedback - I know it looks like pic stitching in the pic, but it's not really. It's a knit so..there's not really any stitching. It's on that side but not the other, so I think it's just some sort of necessary result of how the thing is knitted, although truthfully I have no idea. It doesn't really bother me. Pale blue would be good with this fit too, but I like the pale grey stripe as well.