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post #16 of 37
Your owl looks like the female reproductive system.
post #17 of 37
Thread Starter 

Blackhood thank you for the feed back . I'll look into the different browsers or better yet making sure its better viewable its my first shot at my web page. Yeah i've heard that a few times before Bhowie :) 

 

post #18 of 37
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Originally Posted by Blackhood View Post

Ok so my first post was a little harsh. This is the one constructive post you'll get.
1. Don't claim to be a Master and a newbie in one post. Apart from being stupid it makes you sound like an arrogant douche.
2. You missed a very clearly labelled thread for introducing yourself. You're not a special flower. Play the game by the rules.
3. You've very clearly labelled yourself as Streetware. Why not post in the Streetware forum? seems like a match, no?
4. I tried three browsers before I could make your website work. Don't just design for IE/Safari/Chrome/Firefox. Design for all of them.
5. I gave up trying to explore that flash site, Units don't fit, images are cut up and its lacking in function. I'd personally recommend a full redesign, by someone who knows what they're doing.
6. I spotted three pictures of clothes. You need to up the amount of "product" and decrease the amount of "brand"
I wont comment on the style, because it is clearly not mine, but it might float a few guys boats.
So reel in the ego, respect the fact that the people round here don't like upstarts, but do have a lot of experience in the fashion industries. Several businesses have grown or started as a direct result of this forum, but you don't get a golden ticket.

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post #19 of 37
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post #20 of 37
One thing we can say OP hasn't effing mastered is the difference between "capital" and "capitol."

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post #21 of 37
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Originally Posted by MrG View Post

One thing we can say OP hasn't effing mastered is the difference between "capital" and "capitol."
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Or A-symmetry ! ! spelling is teh funz
post #22 of 37

Don't listen to these ruffians, Fuckin' Master. 

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I, for one, love your work.

post #23 of 37
Although that piece is a bit terrible, it does have McQueen all over it. The dude just needs to realise that the first 10 years in any industry is still learning the ropes. If you're truly great and start at 20, by aged 30 you might well be a master (a la Tom Ford) but no one starts off perfect.

Hahahahahahahahah its a fucking skull cape!
post #24 of 37
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Originally Posted by Blackhood View Post

Although that piece is a bit terrible, it does have McQueen all over it. The dude just needs to realise that the first 10 years in any industry is still learning the ropes. If you're truly great and start at 20, by aged 30 you might well be a master (a la Tom Ford) but no one starts off perfect.
Hahahahahahahahah its a fucking skull cape!


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post #25 of 37
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Originally Posted by Bhowie View Post

Your owl looks like the female reproductive system.

Exactly what I thought, too. Uterus and fallopian tubes.

F*ckin' Master - try to align your graphics on that skull cape/hoody/skood(?). The asymmetry is a bit distracting and looks unpolished. At the placket it would look better if half a skull were on each side, each side meeting at the eye socket. You also have a plaid one that has the same problem. Looks tossed together w/o much thought.

Looking for donated start up capital is a bit corny. What are you? An NGO?
post #26 of 37
Thread Starter 

Thanks I'm a DiL we actually sold the Skull today and all the other Perfekt Kowls haha first day on the market to  > But the points are you make about the asymmetry is well taken thank you guys . That's something I'm trying to work on . The start up button is down btw, yes i realized what you were talking about . Chalk that one up for first web site i guess . Black ty for the feedback its much appreciated . I'll never be perfekt i just strive to produce quality clothing and do what my heart loves :) 

post #27 of 37
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Originally Posted by wrekhavok View Post

Thanks I'm a DiL we actually sold the Skull today and all the other Perfekt Kowls haha first day on the market to  > But the points are you make about the asymmetry is well taken thank you guys . That's something I'm trying to work on . The start up button is down btw, yes i realized what you were talking about . Chalk that one up for first web site i guess . Black ty for the feedback its much appreciated . I'll never be perfekt i just strive to produce quality clothing and do what my heart loves smile.gif 

You're the fucking master.
post #28 of 37

Keep on fucking, master. 

post #29 of 37
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Owls are visionary tribal birds that can see through the veils of illusion as it feels the very esscence of beings. The Owl is also known as the messenger or keeper of secrets. A bridge between...Wisdom, Imagination, and Mystery. Our clothing Esoteric in nature reflect the same aspects of the Owl. We are the wisdom keepers of sacred pattern drafting techniques passed down through generations deep in the Underground Roots of your cities cultures. The owl is here to remind us to stop and look inwards, as individuals, As we harmonicaly resonate in
Perfekt Tension. We are that secret which is hidden, seeked, and once found, birds sing...alchemical songs transformation of self begins.

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post #30 of 37
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Originally Posted by MrG View Post

One thing we can say OP hasn't effing mastered is the difference between "capital" and "capitol."
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Or A-symmetry ! !

Or effective fundraising, punctuation, third-grade grammar, marketing, seeing in color, living amongst humans, the cheat code for Contra, et al.
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