It looks fine but I don't like tie spaces if they're avoidable- as someone in another thread said, the tie space just adds unnecessary geometry in what could be a clean, simple, angular meeting.
I have yet to see a sufficient justification for the tie space. I have shirts, including one from arguably the best bespoke shirtmaker in London if not the world, that has a tie space and honestly my ties slip out of it more than some OTR shirts I have without a tie space.