Do you like this shoulder style?
Don't be in a hurry to let out the center back. You would benefit more from letting out the side body at the top of the armhole/ blade. Will release the back and clean up the blades. You need a bit more length over the neck point on the right shoulder. Could be noted for further jackets.
The sleeves need to be re cut to fit the armhole. Not sure if they have enough fullness or width to work. Was this made for you or RTW?
I prefer a natural shoulder. I got this made. Somehow it didn't turn out that way thus the forum advice. Would it still be possible to go for a natural? Or too much or a risk?
I'm concern on 2 things. The others I think I can live with
1. Top back and blades. Will take note on letting out the side body at the top of armhole/blade.
2. Shoulder dimple. How do I fix this? Assuming there is sufficient fabric tucked in. More sleeve cap?