Sounds like you got those issues fixed but as pictured, I'd work on cleaning up the back a little, perhaps adjusting the sleeve pitch. The sleeves look short. I'd reduce the stride, slim the trouser leg, and adjust the hem accordingly as it'd be too long with a narrower leg. These latter suggestions are a little bit based on preference.
Thank you OTCTailor. I'm itching to get back home so that I can double check all of these things. Unfortunately it will then be well and truly too late to do anything about any shortcomings in time for the event it's intended for. At least I have some direction now for the tailor.