On my tv monitor it doesn't show either, but on my TN-panel LED Samsung SyncMaster it shows perfectly well. Thus I'd suggest increasing the brightness, at least temporarily (or just change the preset).
There seems to be a problem with the break (much more break on his right leg), I guess he's got a hip/low hip or so. But I let the pros continue.
Edit: I suck at postprocessing, so I've just raised the brightness a fuckton and lowered the contrast. Colors are off now and it might look a little weird, but at least you can see something now, I guess.
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you do have aright low shoulder. the waist and seat are too tight in back.
letting these out will allow the jackets back to drop down and not look so short.
there is some excess width across the upper back that could be taken in.