Love the elements of this fit, but to me there is too much layering at the collar. The popped-collar + shawl neck jumper + scarf is too much, I'd much prefer the jacket collar flat if only to balance out the three elements at the neck compared to the one visible layer at the waist.
I'm not against a popped jacket collar in its self, but in this case it just pushes the look into "top heavy" territory.
Having said that, amazing for someone who hasn't posted that thousands of fits that many regulars have.
Thanks for the very constructive comments! I should say, however, the jacket is a safari type jacket where the collar is intended to be worn popped. Maybe lay off the scarf next time...