Perhaps it’s my monitor, but it’s a little hard to see the tie with a shirt that dark.
The pocket square, on the other hand, pops out quite nicely given its contrast with the jacket, and indeed is one of the first things to catch the eye. It might be nice if the tie and the shirt exhibited the same degree of contrast, so the viewer’s eye is directed toward, not away from your face.
Cum grano salis, of course. Could be the photo, could be my monitor, or I could be crazy.
The top is a bit dark. The pants are very very bright so I think it exaggerates the lack of contrast on top. I think a lighter shirt would have been better. Best.