(Sorry, couldn't resist.) Seriously, though, it's great to see someone your age trying to work a look that doesn't involve baggy shorts that hang down to his butt crack. I throw my vote in with those who've advised you to swap out suits for SCs and blazers (just for the time being, that is) and to move away from the gangster vibe. An easy way to do that is by putting dark ties on light shirts instead of light ties on dark shirts. I also want to see a little shirt cuff poking out of each jacket sleeve next time you post here, young man.