well, while i do not like the top one, it seems to work well enough for the fit. as to the second fit, had he just never showed the tip, thats a great looking neat pattern.
That, that, brown... thing.
This is a great look. Love the tie and the chain. I think the lapels are too narrow for the tie or just too narrow in general though. Also the shoulders look a bit wonky in the top picture despite the natural stance. They look much better in the magazine. Both pocket squares look great.