StyledbyShawn: Even if you fixed the shoulders (which... maybe. Sometimes you get a divot from an issue with shoulder padding, sometimes it's due to the shape and width of the shoulders) the jacket would still not fit well enough to be worthwhile
Moo: That's kinda cool. The sweater reminds me of Tom Hardy in Lawless. I can't really get behind the untucked shirt on purpose -- my inclination is to tuck my shirt in and then untuck it as my life requires it. Maybe if the tails were shorter than the sweater, and the pants weren't well-pressed wool -- chinos would make sense. This looks like what you change into when you get home, not a fully-fledged outfit. Maybe you were going for that, but I just don't get it. I'd be uncomfortable going out in it.