Hello my friend. I like the overall color pallete and general look you are expressing. The pocket square would have much greater affect if it were to be only in a jacket. I know personally that you are a true gentleman so a good shave and haircut would further display the good man that you are. Nice collar bar with lovley detachable collar. Lets see some photos with your jacket on, you shaved, and an improved haircut. I think you would strike them dead. It will be a gem.
thankf for you knid words i didnt shave as my razor broke so went out to replace , i havent had a haircut as my usual person is a way so will be getting it done next week . The shirt is actually an attached collar .
One of the few men I would recommend eyebrow shaping to.
In regards to the fit, get a better tie (wider, at least), and sort out the pocket square, so it isn't such an awkward shape--tuck it in a bit more. Can't really see anything in terms of fit, so post a full body.