Long time lurker here trying to learn from you guys on this forum. How am I doing? Warning: Spoiler! (Click to show)
there is a lot that is right with this, good color combo, pretty good fit too.
1. you should shorten your cuffs.
2. pull that tie knot a little tighter, and then pull the tie all the way up.
also, you may or may not know, but a lot of people put critiques in the "like" comment field. have a look if you have not seen them.