The problem is that this is Styleforum people expect some minimum amount of effort, if not knowledge. If you spent 10 seconds looking at the MC casual style thread, you would not have posted this.
Why? You have a seagull on your sweater and your pants are so long you could trip over them if your shoes didn't extend 4" beyond your toes.
That sounds harsh because what you need is tough love. There are a lot of college kids here who dress well for little $.
Since this may be the worst thing I've ever seen in this thread, I'll actually do something to help - if you're a size 9 and will pay shipping from the UK, I'll give you a pair of brown AE Park Ave-s. (they're rain shoes so they're a little beat up but will work great with some TLC)
PM me if that's your size.