This is much better, one little nitpick though is the jackets fit at the right collar. Could just be the way you are standing but you seem to have a big collar cap on this side, which is hidden by your open neck shirt. If the shirt was buttoned with a tie (for example of fit) you would have a big gap there. But as I said it may just be that you have just put the jacket on and it's not settled yet. Great colours though.
Much much better... I think this looks great except for how the pockets on the jacket come around the pockets on the jacket come around the front, that said, color,fit,etc are all good...u should cross post in MC casual.