And I have the exact opposite opinion - sorry Cary G!
To me it would have worked better if the trousers were either just barely off white or navy. Something about the current trousers is just a bit meh for me.
Perhaps a shoe with a little more interest would have helped as well - it's bit 'busy on top' and 'bland on bottom'.
Not that it's bad or anything - just might be stronger with some tweaks.
There - now you have to conflicting opinions - what could be more helpful than that!!!!