Originally Posted by T900
still, think it's a disaster now i have read the comments here.
Although I think the darts take your shirts out of the realm of a traditional dress shirt, it's not a total disaster if they fit well. If you wear the shirt with a suit or blazer, no one is going to see the darts.
But I see your concern, I have shirts that are darted similarly, but they are of the Ben Sherman and Sharagano variety - shirts I typically wouldn't wear in an office environment with slacks, but then again they have either bright colored stripes or embroidery.
Your shirts are fine, although not what you might have wanted, they should be fine as dress shirts for work.