Originally Posted by clark kent
posted this in streetwear and denim, their opinions were that i should never rap again. i do spoken word poetry, but have been writing some rap verses for a while. i probably focus a bit on lyrics too much, but hey whatever. its not like im trying to be the next big thing. i did not upload this video btw, so please ignore the title. i am not working.
a video of me rapping a verse.
Yeah, either stick to spoken word or completely reinvent your style. The combination sounds terrible.
Not saying that you should give up on any of your dreams, but right now your flow sounds wayyy too awkward.
My advice? Take a few of your role models in the rap game and study their style. Then try to mimic them and see how it sounds. After awhile, you'll get a feel of what works for you, and more importantly, what doesn't. For example, not everyone can be a fast rapper. By testing out different rap styles, you'll eventually find your niche.
Good luck.Edited by Gingahbman - 10/11/11 at 4:30pm