It's not about taking my advice, it's frustrating when peoplecome here, ask for feedback, and become intensely contrarian when they get feedback from knowledgable people -- and I don't just mean myself, check WAYWT -- that they don't like. Worse yet, they think that style is an objective, quantifiable thing and they want you to give them all the answers rather than reading around. Simply reading posts here is one of the best things you can do. You're right though Berlin, it's better to avoid a conflict rather than begin one, so sorry Surreal for being hostile. Just remember that reading here is a better way to learn than asking about specific items. Ps Berlin, I don't think I an authority on style. What I'm saying is basic advice. It's better to learn what you want than be told what you want.