More atrociousness, and from someone who gives a shout out to all of the communication majors:
"This hologram is stitched into all of there clothing to ensure that no one can counterfeit there clothing and tarnish the brand name they have built."
Dude, there is a location. Their is a possessive pronoun.
"When I put the suit on completely with my white shirt and tie the suit comes together really nice and looks absolutely gorgeous, it makes an ugly man look handsome."
Go easy on yourself. How ugly can you be? You should rethink the white shirt and tie. The monochromatic thing is over.
"But, the people of my generation are slowly starting to become the generation that is running the business world, running the art industry, the entertainment industry, and any other try of industry. These are all well respected jobs and they all ask for oneself to carry themselves in a certain manner everyday, an appropriate one."
Oneself, themselves, ourselves is screwed if this is an example of the best this generation has to offer.
Seriously, did you read your blog of interminable dross before you posted it? Edit your copy. Read, reread, and reread again.