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post #16 of 23
7/22/10 at 12:09pm
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Wow, I didn't think this post was a good enough reason for people to be so harsh. The point is to short and brief when you write articles for them.
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post #17 of 23
7/22/10 at 1:34pm
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Originally Posted by MrG View Post
I want to be one of the cool kids who have read the article, but I don't want to encourage spam. Someone please make this possible.

I dove on in. OP is apparently one of the people still living in or near Detroit. A local guy is gunning for the Tetris world record. Not a terrible article as far as local fishwraps go.
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post #18 of 23
7/22/10 at 1:37pm
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Originally Posted by FLMountainMan View Post
I dove on in. OP is apparently one of the people still living in or near Detroit. A local guy is gunning for the Tetris world record. Not a terrible article as far as local fishwraps go.
Umm...you do realize the OP wrote the article about himself, right?
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post #19 of 23
7/22/10 at 5:03pm
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Originally Posted by MrG View Post
I want to be one of the cool kids who have read the article, but I don't want to encourage spam. Someone please make this possible.

It is awesome, here you go:

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Detroit area gamer Jeffrey Widzinski has regaining a world record his next obstacle to tackle. It is the Tetris Party Beginner’s Tetris Marathon for Tetris Party. It is one of the Wiiware games available on the Nintendo Wii. The record of 21,013,937 is currently held by legendary gamer Patrick Scott Patterson of Denton, Texas. Jeffrey Widzinski is currently behind him with a score of 15,179,595.

Jeffrey is no stranger to battling this legendary gamer as they have battled back on forth on this game and Madden NFL 09 All Play for the Wiki along with Bubble Bobble for the Wii Virtual Console. Tetris Party beginner’s Variation is a grueling version and requires extreme concentration and fast reaction time. The lines stat falling so fast you have no time to fix any mistakes made. Breaking the current world record should take Jeffrey over 4 hours and no breaks are allowed according to Twin Galaxies rules for the game. How high can the record go? Jeffrey believes he can take the score to at least 35, 000, 000. This record will be attempted the weekend of August 17-18 and will be sent out for verification as soon as possible if it is broken. It looks like Jeff Widzinski and Patrick Scott Paterson could be facing another great gaming feud. Stay tuned for more details.
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post #20 of 23
7/22/10 at 5:05pm
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Originally Posted by MetroStyles View Post
Wow, you are a terrible writer. Don't quit your day job.

exactly what I was about to post. that "article" was fucking painful to read.
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post #21 of 23
7/22/10 at 7:51pm
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The articles are supposed to be basic and I chose to write about video games as my specialty, so what is the problem? Show me what a good article is like please or maybe step up and play the game!!!
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post #22 of 23
7/22/10 at 8:17pm
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Originally Posted by mrgoblueguy View Post
The articles are supposed to be basic and I chose to write about video games as my specialty, so what is the problem? Show me what a good article is like please or maybe step up and play the game!!!

Here. I wrote this in 12 minutes and it is better than yours.

http://www.styleforum.net/showthread.php?t=190852
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post #23 of 23
7/22/10 at 10:13pm
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Originally Posted by mrgoblueguy View Post
The articles are supposed to be basic and I chose to write about video games as my specialty, so what is the problem? Show me what a good article is like please or maybe step up and play the game!!!

1. Don't write about your fucking self.
2. Learn how to construct sentences.
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