Yes, I too would choose a different tie. The shirt also seems a bit too formal for the jacket. Either go with a solid or very subtle check shirt and a lighter tie to bring out the blue windowpane in your jacket. Don't forget a pocket square! Like the jacket very much!
I'm not sure the patterns work. To my eye, everything is cancelling everything else out. I love the jacket. I'd opt for a solid shirt, very light blue or white and let the jacket and tie do the work. Bring in some tonal contrast.
The first tie is Charvet, courtesy of my girlfriend. She woke up early(er than me) one morning in Paris, went shopping and woke me up with not just my double espresso, but also a box from Charvet on place VendÃ´me. Good tie.
Actually, I liked how the first shirt picked up the blue in the jacket. With regards to the tie I'd suggest something in green (not knowing whether it would work with the complexion of your fact though).
The second tie is definitely a 'nay' but otherwise I do think that the first tie is not that bad with the jacket, just that it's a bit too much with the shirt.