Imo there are too few textures/paterns in that outfit clapey.
While all of its pieces look fine, they don't work together or only very boringly so.
Also the burgundy + navy clashes with the bright yellow of the shades.
Maybe change the shade for a PS with some other color, patern and texture to it?
OMG an MC fit that doesn't have an orgy of patterns!? What do I do? Time to take out my sharpie and draw little flowers on my computer screen. There, that will fix it.
Are more minimal/mod looks that hard to get?
I would not know how to add more texture frankly. The suit is cashmere blend, the shoes are suede and I'm wearing a friggin turtleneck, I don't think adding a pocketsquare would be a wise idea, here. but all criticism is welcome.
I'd love to see a complete list like this:
Whose streetard persona is Victor? who is SVBs MC doppelgänger? southernstyle is definitely the MC version of tirailleur. Spoopoker? Vox? Moo? CDHagg? go ahead nominate!