For Christ's sake, your spelling and grammar are horrendous.
Lurk a bit more, and learn the language first and learn to express yourself clearly and succinctly. Only then, make a few, choice posts. Failure to do so means no one else will understand you, not least the person you are critiquing. Take note that inane critiques, however ungrammatical, will always be pointless.
Edited by ExAngel - 8/24/12 at 1:53pm