noobizor, I think it needs a white or light blue shirt, something more inoffensive. I don't hate it as-is but that would make it pretty good imo.
toj, apc, w+h
I know it's a TOJ and this is heresy here but that color looks awful to me.
I don't know why you are face-palming me! Above that pic it says "brad-t", I thought that was brad-t!!
now THAT is a funny image, thank you.