Catching up a little
hendrix - transition between color and texture of shirt and that of the pants is kind of off-putting, your shirt looks much more textured and substantial. Pastel linen pants + white suede brogues is full on Tom Wolfe geriatric easter bunny stuff though, especially with your hair/face/build it looks kind of strange. The shoes are extremely dope on their own though.
asobu - fuckin' amazing.
UrbanComposition - Jeans and boots look kind of lackluster, but the cabling on that sweater is great. People will tell you to size down on the sweater but it looks fine to me, especially with childbearing hips (which I also have to some degree). You don't want any really dramatic contouring. You should still buy better shoes. Honestly I'm only microcritiquing because your pictures are nice and have those PG-esque captions; I've been conditioned to expect only amazing stuff under that kind of typeset marquee.