That's the moto, right? I feel like the shoulders have looked more squared-off, for lack of a better term, in most of the ToJ moto/DR fits that I've seen. Looks good.
IMO the moto shoulders are half an inch too wide, which exaggerates the squared-off structured look. I ended up getting my moto altered to bring the shoulders in and it looks really good now, v similar to how it looks in this pic.
The translucent nature of the trashcan made me do a double take over me thinking you owned an H&M trashcan.
Also, I don't know why you all are giving the blog guy such a hard time. I haven't really liked any of his contributions, but he's been receptive to criticisms. It's not like he's moo and giving you a laundry list of reasons why you're actually not at all right in your observations. Yeah, he has a fashion blog, but it reads more of a personal archive rather than that one kid's a while back who was wrapping his mom's down comforters around his neck and telling you why it was high fashunz.