interesting. the lines on top of that shoulder look crisp as can be to me. the "wrinkling" on the shoulder where the arm attaches is spalla and is intentional. its the only jacket i have that has spalla. i dont love it or hate it, and its neat to have one jacket with that finishing.
i am a fairly big/broad shouldered fellow, so i prefer as little padding and/or structure to my jacket shoulders or they look football-player-esque to me. do you find my jacket shoulders in general to lack in cleanliness of line?
I think that shoulder looks great. it is not too structured and it isnt too soft to me.
i like it.